Sound exercise

In this film we were trying to create a mysterious atmosphere where the good guy seen walking at the start of the scene is taken by a psycho killer seen leaving bloodied up at the end.
In this scene we tried to used diagetic and non diagetic sounds. These were the car sound which cant be seen and the door closing. We also used a sound at the end which didnt fit in with the scene, this didn't however create the effect that we were hoping for.
The best sound effect was when the door closes as we fitted in the sound just perfectly so that the audience hears it just as the door closes.
The car at the start of the scene didn't fit in very well however as we are new to the editing software this was the best that our ability allowed us to do.
I think the sound effects were used quite well and I am happy with the scene.
Overall I think this was a good attempt as it is our first time using the microphone and we are still getting accustomed with the editing software, I am happy with this scene as all of our problems can be fixed with practice.